2020高考英语作文范文+解析
2020年高考英语作文范文汇总及解析
全国卷一
你身边值得尊敬的人+理由
  学校举行作文比赛以你身边敬爱或爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。
  内容包括:
  1、受到敬爱、爱戴的人的简介;
  2、说明理由。
  注意:
  1、词数100左右;
  2、可以适当 增加细节,以使行文连贯;
  3、结束语已为你写好。
写作指导:
审题注意点:
1.最好写自己身边尊敬或爱戴的人,名人,抗疫英雄应该不算身边的人吧?
2.简介最好包括外貌,职业等基本情况,但要简明扼要,不宜拓展太多,毕竟要点2才是重点。
3. 充分拓展尊敬的理由,要点2是文章的body。有理有据,使人信服。
4.文章标题和第一句话已经给出,注意衔接和紧扣标题。
The people I respect
    Thereare many people respectable around us. The people I respect most is my aunt, acharming woman of medium built, who was born into a rich family and received a good education. Now she is an excellent doctor and specializes in internalmedicine.
    As we all know, COVID-19 broke out in March of this year in Wuhan city, which was in urgent need of doctors and nurses.Every one across our country was so frightened at the epidemic that nearly none dared to go to Wuhan city. However, at this crucial moment, it was my aunt that  risked her life to do voluntary work without hesitation, which amazed me so much. I show great respect for her not only because of her courage but also due to her selfless contribution to our homeland. Besides, she doesn't care about money as well as fame but cares for others. Her life attitude also makes a great difference on me.
  All in all, my aunt sets a good example for me. And I do learn a lot from her. That's the reason why I respect her most.
全国卷二
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1. 农场情况;
上海高考时间2020
2. 采摘过程;
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!
【详解】第一步:根据提示可知,上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动。内容包括: 1. 农场情况; 2. 采摘过程; 3. 个人感受。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清
晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词;We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句;Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not only…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增添彩。
全国卷三
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编一个短剧,请你写一封邮件给外教miss Veans,请他指导你们。邮件内容包括
1. 情节简介
2.指导内容,
3.商定时间和地点。
参考范文
Dear Miss Veans:
I am Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.
Our play will be based on the text "horse". The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse. But the artist misunderstood the king, and in the end the king forgave him because of his effort. My classmates and I are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronounciations. We will have a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can come and give us some advice.
Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely
Li Hua
北京卷
  第三部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)

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