高考续写样题 续写Arthur分析和范文解析
高考搞笑
【思路点拨】
1.首先要理解这篇文章,Arthur在上班的路上遇到一位年轻人正在费力地发动汽车,但是没有成功,Arthur主动上前帮忙,正在这时,银行的报警响起来,银行发生了抢劫案,正在帮忙拎包的Arthur撞到一位女士,这位女士吃惊地看着Arthur和他手里的手提箱,Arthur突然意识到:那位年轻人可能是银行劫匪。他开始跑起来,那位年轻人在后面追,不停喊:停下来,站住!
2.文章的主题句是第一句,A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.这句话奠定了后面续写的基调,一件搞笑的事情,所给的文本并没有把搞笑写出来,那么就一定是在续写部分写出搞笑的结尾:Arthur误以为那位年轻人是银行劫匪,实际上并不是,闹了一个大乌龙。
3.再来看一下文本中划线的单词,the young man,the bank thief,suitcase,shouts,都是后面续写中必需的单词,然后再根据续写情节适当选用其他划线单词。
4.根据续写的两段给出的首句,As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”和The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur jumped off with the suitcase.可以推知:Arthur急忙之中跳上了出租车,出租车在警察局把他放下,在警察局叙述完经过,打开手提箱却发现原来自己闹了一个大乌龙。
5.续写整体用一般过去时,尽量使用比较复杂的语法结构,如各种从句,非谓语动词等,续写的文体基本是续写一篇故事结尾,动作描述很多,一定要注意非谓语动词的使用。
范文:
【参考范文】第一段
As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”①So frightened was Arthur that he ran faster with that suitcase.②When he rushed to(代替你们写的ran to)the Park Avenue,he stopped a taxi and jumped into it.③Nervously,he told the driver to speed up and dropped him off at the police station.④With the driver driving fast, leaving the young man’s shouts and the loud noise of the alarm far behind,Arthur felt a little at
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Station and Arthur jumped off with the suitcase,it to a policeman and reported what had happened.Arthur sure the money in surprise,there was no money except some clothes and many mistook the young man for the bank thief.As a result,him.What a funny thing it was for 跳下
hand sth to sb/hand sb sth 递给某人某物to one's+情绪名词
,注意这里用名词,比如  让我高兴的
是,to one's
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因某事向某人道歉insist 坚持认为,坚持要做  这两个意思
当insist 作坚持要做...,要用这个句型  坚持认为  时,后面根据实际情况用时态。

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