killingtimeindoors英语作文
【篇一：killing time indoors】
killing time indoors
要求
1. 现在很多人业余时间喜欢宅在家里
2. 人们对这种做法有不同的看法
3. 我的看法
in modern society, more and more people, especially the 20s or 30s, tend to kill time indoors, especially during holidays. some spend the majority of time online chatting, blogging, shopping, playing computer games,etc. some sit with their eyes glued to the television screen, day w let us go to known about other people’s views on the issue:
nication with others will do harm to people’s body and mind.they think people of killing time indoors is waste of their time and youth.
from my point of view, i don’t think staying indoors for most of the day should be advocated. what people in all ages should do is to spend more time outdoors. the fresh air, the brilliant sunshine, the pleasant green space and so on are all good for people’s health, both physically and psychologically.
【篇二：英语六级作文预测：宅在家里 killing time indoors】
英语六级作文预测：宅在家里 killing time indoors 作文话题：
killing time indoors
1. 现在有不少人业余时间喜欢“宅”在家里
2. 人们对这种做法有不同看法
3. 我的看法
范文： killing time indoors
消磨时间在室内
nowadays a growing number of people, especially the 20s or 30s, tend to stay indoors for most of their spare time, especially on holidays. some spend the majority of the time online chatting, blogging, shopping, dating or playing computer games. some sit with their eyes glued to the television screen, day and night.
如今，越来越多的人，尤其是20岁或30岁时，倾向于留在室内的大部分业余时间，特别是在节假日。一些人把大部分时间花在网上聊天、写博客、购物、约会或者玩电脑游戏。一些人坐在他们的眼睛紧盯着电视屏幕，白天和黑夜。
peoples opinions vary when it comes to this way of killing time. a great number of people maintain that staying indoors is cheap, comfortable, and most importantly, very safe. others, however, frown upon staying indoors for too long. they are worried that lack of physical exercise and face-to-face communication with others will do harm to people’s body and mind.
六级英语作文范文 人们的意见各不相同，当它涉及到这样的消磨时间。许多人认为住在室内很便宜，舒适，最重要的是，非常安全。其他人，但是，皱眉后留在室内太长。他们担心缺乏体育锻炼和面对面交流会伤害到人们的身心。
personally, i dont think staying indoors for most of the day should be advocated. instead, people in all ages, their physical conditions permitting, should be
encouraged to spend more time outdoors. the brilliant sunshine, the pleasant green space, the interactions with other people, etc. are all good for peoples health, both physically and psychologically.
就我个人而言，我不认为在室内呆一天中大部分的日子是应该提倡的。相反，人们在所有年龄段，他们的身体条件允许，应鼓励花更多的时间在户外。灿烂的阳光、宜人的绿地、与其他人的互动等都是有益于人的健康，无论是身体上的，心理上的。
【篇三：2013四级一班高晨智killing time indoors(已改)】
more and more college students like staying at home in thire（拼写错误） spare tim
e. they usually spend their spare time on chatting, shopping and playing games in （改为on）the internet all day. some people even stay at home for one month.
汉语思维和表达，改为some people think that staying at home is a waste of time.） young (形容词怎能做主语？加 the 使其成为名词，表一类人)should keep energy outdoors to practice（意思不明）. however, other people support their（指代不清） action. in their opinions, with the development of technology, the internet
（internet前应有the） have（人称不一致，改为has） played an importand （拼写错误）role in our life. people can obtain
knowledge more quckly（拼写错误） and more convenient to learn （表述不清）.
（要么against[反对]，要么for[赞成],二选一）this behavior. the period of young（词性错误，改为youth） is golden time in our life. we should go out to enjoy life. in outdoors, we can borden（拼写错误） our society
experience, and make friends from different fields and keep healthy. in a word, i pref
er going out to staying at home.
高晨智
批改意见：
1、160字，字数合适。标点符号、大小写没出问题，很好。
2、文章框架尚可，但没有围绕给出主题来写，关键词” killing time indoors”竟然
没出现哪怕一次！应先写出关键词。再写近似词组“stay at home”，意思还是有所区别的；
3、 拼写问题，一大忌讳，丢了印象分；
4、 内容表达问题，有几个句子不知道什么意思；
5、 句式问题，整篇文章中没有看到像样的从句。
可以拿到8分左右！
（word有单词纠错功能，下次交作文时用word，以便尽快发现拼写错误！） 建议：
1、 解决单词拼写和句子的语法问题
2、 先背诵经典范文（中英文）；
3、默写经典范文，可以看着中文写英文或看着英文写中文；
4、仿写或套写。就把手中的近几年的作文真题范文按照此程序试试，一定有突
破。
请仔细研读和分析范文（注意红部分为好词好句）：
killing time indoors
a) 现在很多人业余时间喜欢“宅”在家里
b) 人们对这种做法有不同的看法
c) 我的看法
【范文】
nowadays a growing number of people, especially the 20s or 30s, tend to stay indoors for most of their spare time, especially during holidays. some spend the majority of their time online chatting, blogging, shopping, dating or playing computer games. some sit with their eyes glued to the television screen, day and night.
people’s opinions vary when it comes to this ways of killing time. a great number of people maintain that staying indoors is cheaper, comfortable, and most importantly, very safe. others, however, frown upon staying indoors for too long. they are worried that lack of physical exercise and face-to-face communication with others will do harm to people’s body and mind.
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