书面表达专题
镇江市2020年中考英语试题
七、书面表达（共1题；满分15分）
33．（15分）技术进步带来学习方式的变化．假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论．请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足．
Traditional learning in a classroom ●fixed timetable a plan made by a school ●face﹣to﹣face communication ●colorful class activities ●team spirit | Modern learning on the Internet ●flexible （灵活的） timetable a plan made by oneself 教师节 贺卡●online communication ●rich learning resources ●any place with the Internet |
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要求：
1．所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息；爱情公寓张伟
2．对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；
3．文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息．
With the development of modern technology， the way of learning is changing． I think______．
【分析】高分句型一：
I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom．我想我还是喜欢在书房里传统的学习．句子中think引导一个宾语从句．
高分句型二：
A clear plan is often made by a school， so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects．一个明确的计划往往是由学校制定的，所以我不需要考虑如何安排何时学习不同的科目．need to do sth表示需要做某事．
牛年新年祝福语大全 简短【解答】With the development of modern technology， the way of learning is changing．（引出话题） I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom．【高分句型一】（我喜欢的方式） First， there is a fixed timetable． A clear plan is often made by a school， so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects．【高分句型二】Second， we can have the face﹣to﹣face communication with both teachers and classmates． Third，there are colorful activities in class． In this way， I can learn the new knowledge happily． What's more， learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit， so I can learn how to get along with others．（理由）
However， when I study in the classroom， sometimes I can't follow my teacher． And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from．（不足）
【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误．最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误．
镇江市2019年中考英语试题
七、书面表达
66.假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。
Required course | Elective Course | |||
Subject | Travel of science ● introducing scientists and inventions | Subject | Photography ● taking photos | Gardening ● growing flowers |
Teacher | a professor | Teacher | a young reporter | 4:-4: 描写月亮的优美语段School’s garden |
Time & Place | ● 2:30 p .m.- 3: ● school hall | Time & Place | ● 4:-4: ● City Park | An old gardener |
Tip | take notebooks and pens | Tip | Take cameras | tools offered by school |
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；
2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；
水果店3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
【答案】Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2: to 3: in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the f
ormer because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【解析】
【详解】这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结
构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。
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