【原创】 2021八省联考英语读后续写方法探究
 2021八省联考英语"读后续写"方法探究
考试原题：During this past year, I've had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road fbr close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the wi_ndows, big signs that said NEED A JACK （千斤顶），and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called fbr his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw （锯子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man's hand, but he wouldn't take it, so instea
d I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I'd had lunch.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
【写作指导】
一、重点划红
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the wi_ndows, big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but t
hat it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw(据子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirt yand sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
二、从关键词得出以下信息： 
时间：this past year；八省联考有哪些省one of the instance of car trouble；地点：on the side of the road人物：I；a Mexican family (the father；the wife；the daughter) (They were strangers)事件：I was sick of the way most people were unwilling to give me a help when I had
car trouble.Once, my car broke down and I needed a Jack to change a new tire. The Mexican family did what they could to help me on their way home, such as, the daughter helped expressed in English what the father wanted to conveyed, the father cut a log out to support the small Jack, and the mother hurriedly ran to buy a new tire iron because I broke their previous one.  I was happy and finally made it togave the money to the mother.  主题：根据以上整理出来的事件脉络，不难发现这篇文章在事件上主要体现这一家人对我的帮助（help），而在情感上已从sick of转变到happy，所以整个故事的主题应是这一家人对我的帮助（help）+改变对陌生人的看法和认识。
三、“前”、“中”、“后”让事情“做”得更“圆满”
说明：“前”要衔接已给首句“中”描写过程“后”衔接第二段首句文本最想强调的情感点就在于想通过the Mexican family对我的help改变我对陌生人的看法和认识。所以在“写”的情节构思和推断上，绝不可以脱离故事的主题的，所以续写的两段必须紧扣这一主题。1. 确定第一段段落大意及情节推断根据两段已给首句的关键词（标红）和主题（help）确定第一段的主要内容：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.A
fter they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.由两段的关键词和主题，我们可以得出第一段的主要内容应是他们邀请我“一起吃午饭”。这是一件需要“做”的事情，所以可以采用“前”、“中”、“后”推断情节先后的方法。
2. 确定第二段段落大意及情节推断根据第二段的首句After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.和主题这一家人对我的帮助改变我对陌生人的看法和认识，以及结尾正能量的原则，可以确定第二段的主要内容应是写我对陌生人的看法和认识的改变，涉及到所看所感所想所做，回应前文。明线：I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help.暗线：预示结果会对人性的价值重构
明线：put a 20 dallors bill暗线：无私乐助精神的反射
明线：Mexico farm暗线：为之后可能相遇打伏笔
明线：had lunch暗线：乐助和友善的信号
明线：paper bag暗线：情节焦点（主题正增强） 初稿：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. “Not yet, because I have been waiting here for three hours,” I said.She told me that they didn’t have it either and invited me together.Afterwards, the girl took out a large basket from the truck, which contained many
kinds of fruit.With pride and joy, she explained that these were specialty from Mexico. So we sat on the roadside to share them,chatting like old friends we hadn’t seen for a long time.Throughout the conversation, they shared with me the pretty experience in Mexico and welcomed me to visit them at any time.When it was time to leave, the girl’s mother handed me a paper bag of fruit.With deepest gratitude, I saw them off.   After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag.Much to my surprise, I found the $20 bill I had stuffed into the girl’s mother.There existed a note, saying“We had got your great gratitude and helping you is the right thing to do.” Moved by their words, I suddenly felt that there were still kind-hearted people in the world willing to help me,although I encountered a lot of indifference.From then on, I made a decision to put a big jack on my big jeep, longing to help more like me who used to ask for help on the road to the best of my ability.

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