名词修饰具体化
修饰名词时举出具体例子，应用排比，对比，举例子等方法使得给出的例子更加丰满有说服力。
男人的心声Example 1.很多食物。
There is a lot of food like Fried rice with egg, GongBao Chicken, Ma Po Bean Curd, Dumplings, Pecking Duck and so on. The icing on the cake is that the dumplings have got all kinds of delicious flavors: beef flavor, pork flavor, chicken flavor etc.
Example 2. 风景优美。
There stands raws of trees, lays banches of flowers, and you can see sailboats sailing on the lake.
It has a beautiful scenery there. I can smell the grasss and flowers in the air, hear the cries of the birds , and feel the bracing breeze on my face. Bold eagles flying around and the tides coming and go.
Example 3外国的好玩的事情
I would be able to know about interesting stuff like their customs, cultures, and histories. For example, how to greet with each other, how to celebrate traditional festivals.
形容词修饰数字化
形容词要使用数字来支持，给出具体数字，让形容词更具体更真实。老外特别崇拜数字。所以尽量多使用数字。
Example 1:长城有很久远的历史 。
The Great Wall has a long history.
The Great Wall has a history of over 2000 years (twenty centuries).
Example 2:我爱我的祖国 诗歌长城由很多人修建而成。
The Great Wall was built by many people.
The Great Wall was built by over two million people.
example 2 这座建筑很高。
The building is very tall.
The building is as tall as 468 meters, ranking first in Asia and third in the world. There are 68 spheres in the building and the three biggest ones are observatories, where tourists can have a birds-eye view of the whole city. It has been the landmark of the city since it was completed.
万能理由
1.增长知识
It can enlarge my knowledge and broaden my horizon, for instance, I will be able to know more about global economic situation and what is happening in other countries, and . A also provides me a chance to learn new skills like painting, cooking or playing musical instruments.（划线部分应随机应变）
2.便宜、省钱
It’s cheap and economical.
It can help me save a lot of money to support my tuition fee.
Compared to B, A charges much less and the price is reasonable for most people. I mean, if I choose B, I have to spend 100$. on the contrary, it only takes me 10$ to choose A. （B代指不支持的选择，A代表支持的选择）
3.方便/省时间
It台风级数’s convenient and I would be able to save tons of time.
衣服上的霉斑怎么洗掉U know, it takes me only __ 时间 to _事_by chosing A, it will take at least_时间__to 事 .by chosing B.( B代指不支持的选择，A代表支持的选择)
I could spend the time saved on sleeping or reading which is considered to be better way of leisure and relaxation.浪费时间
4.放松
指事情：It can help me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study (after a day’s hard work), I feel like my fatigue, stress and depression are all gone.
I like it because it’s fabulously relaxing and quiet.
指地点：I’m fascinated to the harmonious atmosphere which could make me refreshed and energetic. I can release my emotion, pressure and uneasiness through it.
5.交友
指事情：I would be able to make friends with the people around the world and get to know about interesting stuff like their customs, cultures, and histories. For example, how to greet with each other, how to celebrate traditional festivals etc.
指地点：I could make friends with the people in the park (restaurant, school…), especially those from overseas. During the conversation with the foreigners, I can practic
e my English and perhaps learn something other languages like English, French, Spanish and German.
指爱好：I would be able to make friends with those who share the same love for … Perhaps we can have a little get-together. We talk, we laugh, we discuss, and we all feel like one big family.
6环境保护
Since people’s living environment and animals’ habitats today are in the threaten of environmental pollution, it is becoming more important for us to protect the ecosystem. By doing this, it would be environment-friendly not only because it does not produce any harmful material, but also because it is degradable.
7健康
By doing A, I can keep my body in a good shape, because A can help me to lose weight and excercise my muscles. A also provides me a good health condition, it is said that “An
apple a day keeps doctor away”, to me, doing A can keep doctors away，too.
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